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Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Klong5.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 01:55, 18 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Neutral countries

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Hi. The part of the introduction that says "The project was not initially targeted against the Soviet Union; rather the concern was that German scientists might emigrate and continue their research in countries such as Spain, Argentina or Egypt, all of which had sympathized with Nazi Germany." does not match what reference 8 says, which is used to justify that sentence there and when it is repeated in the "Capture and detention" section (the other reference used I couldn´t find to read it). In the CIA reference used it talks about neutral countries without specifying which ones, when it mentions Spain, Argentina or Egypt it also says Sweden, Portugal and Turkey to talk about gold and saying that those countries in general cooperated to recover it (marked with the number 58 in the source). I was wondering if it was possible to replace the incomplete list of countries by the term "neutral countries" which is the one used in the reference to talk about Project SAFEHAVEN. Verent (talk) 22:21, 9 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Wiki Education assignment: ENG 21011 Research Writing

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 21 August 2023 and 17 December 2023. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Casphodel23, Alainasayre (article contribs). Peer reviewers: JhaStudent, Mbaumg12, Elliot.bw25.

— Assignment last updated by Wordnerd104 (talk) 23:04, 11 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hello all, I wanted to introduce myself before I make any edits. My partner and I are planning on clarifying the "scientific achievements" part of this article to make it more specific. Thank you for having us. Casphodel23 (talk) 21:14, 27 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Not a huge fan of the last sentence in the lead

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To get that out of the way, it reads like it's AI-generated - I don't know if it is - but that's not my main problem with it.

I don't disagree with the claim, per se, it's just that it feels oddly unencyclopedic, and out of place, compared to the rest of the lead section, and the article as a whole. It's got a very essay-like style to it: rather than being based on facts or events, it's a philosophical commentary that smacks of subjective thoughts on the operation; it doesn't, as far as I can see at least, seem to be based on any of the factual information contained in the article, instead making an ideological judgement on the situation; and, because it isn't sourced (and it's not in quotes), it's not even possible to justify its inclusion as one author's view of the events.

To wit, while I'm sure it's possible to argue the article justifies the overall view that Paperclip "blends scientific achievement and ethical controversy" (although it'd be better if it was attributed to people having made that assessment, rather than our article just saying that's what it does), the subsequent part ("reflecting the challenges of reconciling the pursuit of knowledge against values of justice and human rights") is quite literally impossible to characterize as anything but a subjective commentary on these questions, and one which is currently made in wiki voice. Never even mind the fact that it's not shown how "values of justice and human rights" specifically are linked to Operation Paperclip, the idea that this hypothetical reconciliation faces "challenges" is a vague assertion that doesn't rely on factual information or events and is just based on, presumably, the personal opinion of whoever wrote this phrase in this article.

It would be much better written, in my mind, as something like: "The operation's legacy has been the source of much discussion and debate; while the scientific achievements derived from it are widely acknowledged, controversy about its ethical implications, particularly with regards to how questions of justice and human rights should be integrated within the pursuit of knowledge, remains prevalent". This would remain in the realm of surmising how sources discuss the operation, be based on facts and discussions actually taking place rather than on some unsourced subjective opinion about the matter, and be overall more appropriate for Wikipedia's usual tone. However, it would still necessitate the content of the article itself reflecting this, per WP:MOSLEAD, which as of right now doesn't look, to me, to be the case.

As such, I'm removing this sentence as an unsourced, POV, essay-like addition. I replaced it with the less specific take that the operation's legacy is, in general, controversial, without going into grand ideas of "justice" or "human rights", something which can be justified via the "Controversies" section in my eyes (and otherwise the lead ends very abruptly and strangely). I'm not inherently opposed to adding the original sentence back in, of course - anyone is welcome to argue why that should be the case here. LaughingManiac (talk) 15:44, 24 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]